Feedback
Feedback is imperative in acknowledging the hard efforts of work design.
Here are some feedback comments from Billy Blue's lecturers received throughout the course.
Hi Elizabeth,
Thank you for submitting
Assessment 3. Well done! Excellent progress!
* Excellent materiality and colour palette, good visual impact.
* Accuracy of compositing - excellent decorative scheme with well-integrated objects.* Texturising - the textures follow perspective lines to the vanishing point. Beautiful textures!
* Light effects and shading - dramatic graduation in the direction of natural/artificial light sources.
* Excellent presentation, good balance and flow of text and images.
* Rationale could be useful to give good insight into creative process, referring to the design elements and principles.
Julia Lumsden
Billy Blue Lecturer
Elizabeth, Great work -
Overall,
research and presentation of
information is professional and detailed throughout. You have prepared yourself
for a thorough site visit - documenting
your process well. The inspection check-list has been completed with a level of relevant data and investigation.
You are well prepared for the following
stages of the project and assessment to come. Clear and relevant Site
photographs included.
You have provided very detailed sketches
and measured drawings that are with appropriate detail and dimensions. Well
Done - I look forward to seeing you transform this space!
Katherine Galettis
Billy Blue Lecturer
Great Work Elizabeth
I can really see such an improvement with your presentation skills! It was a joy reading and listening to your presentation - good work!
Your visuals were strong and all the background information was really intriguing - I love your inclusion of 'The Wood Room' collab.’’
Nice one.
Mariah Burton
Billy Blue Lecturer
Elizabeth, thank you for
a lovely first response to the brief.
A well researched and cohesive presentation of your ideation.
Wendy Fitzgerald
Billy Blue Lecturer
Hi Elli,
Thank you for the
care taken in preparing and organizing your portfolio of sketches. The drawing
techniques are challenging
for any beginner, so you
did well! In general, the
drawings are great with
a rich variety of tones, accuracy, sharp lines, and smooth gradations.
Julia Lumsden
Billy Blue Lecturer
Hi Ellie
Please see attached video feedback.
Well Done!
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Assess1_Feedback-Ellie.mp4
Wendy Fitzgerald
Billy Blue Lecturer
Elizabeth, thank you for
a lovely first response to the brief.
A well researched and cohesive presentation of your ideation.
Wendy Fitzgerald
Billy Blue Lecturer